For literacy we have been practising how to write a explanation because of our Eastle writing. First we had to make a quick plan for our introduction, then we had to write our explanation about Why It Is Important To Go Outside. I found using my plan about my introduction hard to make my paragraphs because it was very vague. I’m proud of myself because I finished it in 1 hour and 15 min. Here is my explanation.
Why it is important to spend time outside
Have you ever been sitting inside on your phone, and looked out the window and wondered, are there actually benefits for being outside? Being outside is important for many reasons like you can get a lot of fresh air from trees and the ocean. It can get you off devices by providing other entertainment which can be quite good for your mental health by getting you to do more fitness and calm you down.
Firstly, you can get a lot of fresh air from trees and the ocean which is good for your lungs because in doors you are just using the same air and carbon dioxide every time you breathe in and out, but outside you use clean fresh air that no one has used.
As well as getting you fresh air going outside can also get you off devices which can make your eyes very sore and they can also make you isolated from the outside world, by keeping you from socialising with other people, plus who would like to be stuck inside looking at a screen when there is an amazing world out there?
Finally, getting outside is good for your mental health, by getting you away from all the stress that social media has made you feel like you need to do everything that everyone else is doing. If you have a big work load that is stressful, getting outside and listening to the birds can just calm you down and centre you.
In conclusion, there are lots of benefits for going outside like getting off devices and socialising, getting you fresh air that can help your lungs and good for your mental health by helping you work though stress. So go and get outside and have some fun.